12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-11 09:25:14no background rushed sex no detail and no end. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-11 09:25:14no background rushed sex no detail and no end. Porn sex it really ruins a story when the characters don’t stay together. it really ruins a story when the characters don’t stay together. 4/10READERReport 2006-12-23 11:17:44too short,need details.great possibilities.try again.5/10READERReport 2006-10-30 21:50:36Booo try again«123» it really ruins a story when the characters don’t stay together. when you have incest and don’t stay together after you end up hating each other because every time you see each other it will break your heart knowing that one or both of you moved on.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-10 23:20:34not bad!Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-17 15:06:52Reads like it’s someone else’s work, but then again maybe they all are? I agree with others, though – add more detail. when you have incest and don’t stay together after you end up hating each other because every time you see each other it will break your heart knowing that one or both of you moved on.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-10 23:20:34not bad!Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-17 15:06:52Reads like it’s someone else’s work, but then again maybe they all are?
