Not a critique more of an observation.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-24 23:42:07If I could vote, it would be positive, I think everything happened too fast. Porn sex 22 comments«12345»ray carletonReport 2018-09-15 23:18:20Seems strange to me that a few if any fibbers from clothes or swim suits will clog the filters but all that ball and pussy juice wont and is good for them lol. Not a critique more of an observation.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-24 23:42:07If I could vote, it would be positive, I think everything happened too fast. 22 comments«12345»ray carletonReport 2018-09-15 23:18:20Seems strange to me that a few if any fibbers from clothes or swim suits will clog the filters but all that ball and pussy juice wont and is good for them lol. Something like thatedmondlReport 2016-12-24 23:46:49I agree it could have been longer with a longer explanation of the sex acts it deserves another chapter at least I gave it a positive voteAnonymous readerReport 2016-10-20 16:34:29I got hard just reading thisAnonymous readerReport 2014-07-09 17:21:57A very short story but hot.«12345» Not a critique more of an observation.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-24 23:42:07If I could vote, it would be positive, I think everything happened too fast. Seems to me, also, the Sis would not be quite as cooperative unless Bro had played with her 1st or Dad had approached her with Mon & Big Bro not around.
