That is before we move on to the writing, it is almost devoid of adjectives, and the descriptive writing (such as it is) is very pedestrian. That is before we move on to the writing, it is almost devoid of adjectives, and the descriptive writing (such as it is) is very pedestrian. Porn sex Bellatrix is supposed to be as mad as a bucket; here she is more like a kindly whore. I know that all that sAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-17 10:17:52i can say alot of things, but i dont need to this story speakes for itselfhappy readerReport 2008-06-17 00:56:30all i can say is amen to u man. 3 comments«1»OvidReport 2010-05-09 09:21:40I don’t see the point of the fundamental changes in everyone’s characters; Dumbledore and Harry don’t view each other as equals (largely because they are not), Petunia is incredibly prudish and therefore unlikely to slip off for a little lesbian fun (with a witch, who she despises) especially with her husband at the same table, Dudley and Vernon should be bouncing between terror and rage. The idea of the story is good, and I applaud anyone willing to complete a story that has stopped before it was finished, but in my opinion it needs a lot of work to live up to its potential.
