8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-04-29 00:22:22Your other stories at questionable at the least but I really liked this one, it’s a little too short but I like long reads. Keep up this writing style, under 14 years is just too young, and I’m 16 sooo. Porn vedio …anonymous readerReport 2011-10-13 22:21:25Woah, major change in your writing technique. So cliche I could have told the story after the first few sentences.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-26 02:13:07Wow, this story really contains everything doesn’t it? I love it. Very nice.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-19 22:06:36Kewl you shloud come up with that. Keep it up, and you might have less haters. Fairly well written. Keep up this writing style, under 14 years is just too young, and I’m 16 sooo. …anonymous readerReport 2011-10-13 22:21:25Woah, major change in your writing technique. I love it. So cliche I could have told the story after the first few sentences.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-26 02:13:07Wow, this story really contains everything doesn’t it? 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-04-29 00:22:22Your other stories at questionable at the least but I really liked this one, it’s a little too short but I like long reads. Fairly well written. Keep up this writing style, under 14 years is just too young, and I’m 16 sooo. …anonymous readerReport 2011-10-13 22:21:25Woah, major change in your writing technique.
