8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-21 23:52:20I like it fuck the grammer nazisanonymous readerReport 2013-10-09 05:37:13good start but here and yes the sex part is great. Sex vedio I get a boner reading the and that’s good…keep on writing…I’m a fan.«12» but you do need to draw it out here and establish some story plot.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-01 16:27:42in total agreement with a couple of the other commenters. but you do need to draw it out here and establish some story plot.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-01 16:27:42in total agreement with a couple of the other commenters. I get a boner reading the and that’s good…keep on writing…I’m a fan.«12» 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-21 23:52:20I like it fuck the grammer nazisanonymous readerReport 2013-10-09 05:37:13good start but here and yes the sex part is great. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-21 23:52:20I like it fuck the grammer nazisanonymous readerReport 2013-10-09 05:37:13good start but here and yes the sex part is great. if you don’t care about your fans/audience, why should we care about reading your shit for brain stories. but you do need to draw it out here and establish some story plot.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-01 16:27:42in total agreement with a couple of the other commenters. and to think I gave positive votes to your other stories, not any moreanonymous readerReport 2013-09-30 15:36:12Quick; to the point; no big romantic build up; just straight to the sex.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-26 23:52:17I gave a positive read…I love the
