It is not worth the space it occupies herein, and should be edited out . Porn vedio TRIPE! It is not worth the space it occupies herein, and should be edited out . OMG I JUST NOTICED MY COMMENT HAS MORE CREATIVE THOUGHT THEN HIS WHOLE STORY ROFLMAOanonymous readerReport 2010-12-15 04:49:272009-08-21 19:32:05
As you are reading this aloud and you pause to take a breath, insert a carriage return to create a paragraph at that point, makes it much better. 1
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You are not logged in.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-28 17:47:22ÚÑÈ
ÚÑÈLarryReport 2009-09-19 03:37:21This was a very poorly written trashy story that made little if any sense. TRIPE! It is not worth the space it occupies herein, and should be edited out . On a scale of 1 to 10, I rate it a MINUS 9, I have had the displeasure of reading many awful tales on this site, but this one absolutely is the worst..«123» It appears in a sex site, yet has extremely little sex in it, other that pure wierdness. TRIPE! 1
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You are not logged in.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-28 17:47:22ÚÑÈ
ÚÑÈLarryReport 2009-09-19 03:37:21This was a very poorly written trashy story that made little if any sense.
