Thanks for the entertainment.«1» I know this is your first story here and hope you don’t give up. 4 comments«1»edmondlReport 2016-04-21 03:24:45True or fantasy keep writingAnonymous readerReport 2010-05-09 15:59:01wtf is this why does all this sound weird… Sex videos donb is right about easier reading. lol is it true or a fantasy cause im 22 and i kinda feel bad for u if its trueAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-24 08:34:57Nice story. lol is it true or a fantasy cause im 22 and i kinda feel bad for u if its trueAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-24 08:34:57Nice story. donb is right about easier reading. Many people will not even look at a story once they see that. You did fairly well though, at least you didn’t put the entire thing into one WALL of print. Many people will not even look at a story once they see that. Yes you should keep on writing. I know this is your first story here and hope you don’t give up. You did fairly well though, at least you didn’t put the entire thing into one WALL of print. It appears that you have promise. I know this is your first story here and hope you don’t give up.
