Changing names from one sentence to the next and then about every other paragraph confuses readers. Sex Kim/Stacy/Kim and varied dick sizes – rubbish (and rape/blackmail) Crap story. These errors distract fr5om readab ility and enjoyment.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-03 00:17:30this is rape not incest!«12345» Kim/Stacy/Kim and varied dick sizes – rubbish (and rape/blackmail) Crap story. Also, be consistent with the size figures. – voteanonymous readerReport 2011-02-17 11:30:12Proof reading would help a lot! Also, be consistent with the size figures. 43 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-05 18:19:37reads like a story that was stolen and they tried to change it to make it seem like it was theirs.Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-07 05:11:52That nigga dick size kept changingGhostrider939Report 2012-06-11 22:24:53Try to get the facts right and keep them that way. These errors distract fr5om readab ility and enjoyment.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-03 00:17:30this is rape not incest!«12345» Changing names from one sentence to the next and then about every other paragraph confuses readers. 43 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-05 18:19:37reads like a story that was stolen and they tried to change it to make it seem like it was theirs.Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-07 05:11:52That nigga dick size kept changingGhostrider939Report 2012-06-11 22:24:53Try to get the facts right and keep them that way. These errors distract fr5om readab ility and enjoyment.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-03 00:17:30this is rape not incest!«12345»
