I WILL NOT READ A STORY WITHOUT PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:23:07hey,,,,u want some more dick? I have to agree with most of the previous comments. Sex I have to agree with most of the previous comments. im 14 and if yes comment “Yes to sex with the 14″and ill give u my phone number. …angiesloverReport 2012-11-30 21:55:43keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lteranonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 14:46:07Good story. I have to agree with most of the previous comments. Quit switching back and forth between present and past tense.«12» im 14 and if yes comment “Yes to sex with the 14″and ill give u my phone number. …angiesloverReport 2012-11-30 21:55:43keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lteranonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 14:46:07Good story. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-12-04 04:27:32THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NO PARAGRAPHS!!! I WILL NOT READ A STORY WITHOUT PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:23:07hey,,,,u want some more dick? I WILL NOT READ A STORY WITHOUT PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:23:07hey,,,,u want some more dick? im 14 and if yes comment “Yes to sex with the 14″and ill give u my phone number. …angiesloverReport 2012-11-30 21:55:43keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lteranonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 14:46:07Good story. RE-WRITE WITH PARAGRAPSH OR DON’T POST!!!!!! GAVE NEGATIVE RATING DUE TO LACK OS PARAGRAPHS!!! TOO HARD TO READ!!
