well not the lamest sex scene writing of all time, but it’s pretty damn bad. It’s okay to say “the mouthpiece” or “the jacket”. Sex videos well that’s just bad writing. I think many people will be interested in it..!Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-11 02:09:35Wow… You must be a band nerd that’s never been laid… well that’s just bad writing. you rush the sex scene at the end and spend most of the story on bullshit that makes no sense, then give the lamest excuse for hooking up I’ve ever heard, followed by… well not the lamest sex scene writing of all time, but it’s pretty damn bad. well that’s just bad writing. We got what type it was the first time, and the fact that some of the detail was quite irrelevant… well that’s just bad writing. you rush the sex scene at the end and spend most of the story on bullshit that makes no sense, then give the lamest excuse for hooking up I’ve ever heard, followed by… Read some of the higher rated stories and figure out what to do before posting again. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 09:28:39llaP7m A big thank you for your post.Really looking forward to read more. We got what type it was the first time, and the fact that some of the detail was quite irrelevant…
