Oh and I’m puzzled why you use “nerd” to describe the loser slacker main character? 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 09:25:17The story was good although very juvenile and childish in many parts but that could just be due to your age(I’m guessing 13-15) but with the exception of all the juvenile overtones the story seems written fairly well if a bit short, however please stop using long lines of “*” to separate days. Porn sex Nerds are super smart and excel in school academics and would never be late to school or class, “geeks” however would lay around all weekend doing nothing but playing video games. Also the entire “Monday” paragraph was giant block of text which is also a real pain in the ass to try and read. Nerds are super smart and excel in school academics and would never be late to school or class, “geeks” however would lay around all weekend doing nothing but playing video games. It screws up the formatting of the post and ruins the experience for some who only have small screens to read. (PuppetMaster)anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 06:53:47hmmm.interesting,i totally enjoyed it!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 02:49:35Wow. Great so far, looking forward to future parts!«1» It screws up the formatting of the post and ruins the experience for some who only have small screens to read.
