I don’t like insest. Porn sex The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. I don’t like insest. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading.
