You could fade in and out with flashbacks, before you go into stageIII. Add back-story and a little character development instead of just raw scene. Sex I’d like a continuation of it, so long as more than one hole gets used.«1» Add back-story and a little character development instead of just raw scene. I find that If I don’t have a backstory and reasons to write I’ll fizzle out on just bare scenes.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-06 22:32:59Good, but I don’t see any lesbian action as your tag suggested.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-27 16:54:43Different. But good. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2012-11-29 04:11:48Realistic reactions and scenes. I find that If I don’t have a backstory and reasons to write I’ll fizzle out on just bare scenes.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-06 22:32:59Good, but I don’t see any lesbian action as your tag suggested.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-27 16:54:43Different. But good. I find that If I don’t have a backstory and reasons to write I’ll fizzle out on just bare scenes.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-06 22:32:59Good, but I don’t see any lesbian action as your tag suggested.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-27 16:54:43Different. You could fade in and out with flashbacks, before you go into stageIII. But good. But good. Add back-story and a little character development instead of just raw scene.
