Run-on sentences it could be an interesting read. Sex Very well wrote which maks it readable can’t wait for part 2!!!«12» 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. Very well wrote which maks it readable can’t wait for part 2!!!«12» Give it another try.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-10 09:05:53so why can’t my dog remove him self from my gf after hs has knotted her then?anonymous readerReport 2013-01-10 02:04:01you should back up, show the history of how he started fucking his daughter and how she started fucking dogsDonkeyDick6Report 2013-01-09 19:18:06thanks mate i appreciate the supportanonymous readerReport 2013-01-09 19:13:41Well, it is very amusing story if nothng else. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. Very well wrote which maks it readable can’t wait for part 2!!!«12» The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the
