I suggest that in your next story, you give some visual details on the world around the character. A bit too rated X.READERReport 2005-04-04 08:25:39I write scifi but even I can’t stand this one. Porn sex 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-13 00:58:34This DEFINATELY needs to be made into a series. Serves me right for reading in the less read section.READERReport 2005-04-04 02:55:20Strange. Serves me right for reading in the less read section.READERReport 2005-04-04 02:55:20Strange. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-13 00:58:34This DEFINATELY needs to be made into a series. I liked it.READERReport 2005-09-20 11:39:10Interesting story. How much has changed in 80 years?READERReport 2007-04-30 21:15:11I think the premise is intriguing and the story is well written. How much has changed in 80 years?READERReport 2007-04-30 21:15:11I think the premise is intriguing and the story is well written. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-13 00:58:34This DEFINATELY needs to be made into a series. A bit too rated X.READERReport 2005-04-04 08:25:39I write scifi but even I can’t stand this one. I liked it.READERReport 2005-09-20 11:39:10Interesting story. I liked it.READERReport 2005-09-20 11:39:10Interesting story. :o«1» 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-13 00:58:34This DEFINATELY needs to be made into a series. Serves me right for reading in the less read section.READERReport 2005-04-04 02:55:20Strange.
