And 2, just work on the grammer some more«123» 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-08 04:32:52Read the first couple of sentances and my first thought was, “Kenneth Lighthawk? Really?Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-28 02:12:47i am not a tenchi fan so the story seemed good to me, keep writing, i will read it.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-06 22:36:43Since I don’t care a bit about anime or what ever the hell Tenchi is I can say that I like the world you created and am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Sex vedio Really?Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-28 02:12:47i am not a tenchi fan so the story seemed good to me, keep writing, i will read it.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-06 22:36:43Since I don’t care a bit about anime or what ever the hell Tenchi is I can say that I like the world you created and am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Really?Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-28 02:12:47i am not a tenchi fan so the story seemed good to me, keep writing, i will read it.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-06 22:36:43Since I don’t care a bit about anime or what ever the hell Tenchi is I can say that I like the world you created and am looking forward to reading the next chapter.
