cant wait to read your other stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:48:21needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer. Sex vedio 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-15 08:51:30while i agree that the story wasn`t all that great, i do encourage you to work on it a little bit moreanonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:49:03needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer. This shit sucks! keep up the good work! it’s not romantic in any way and definatelly not something i would encourage the author to write again. it’s not romantic in any way and definatelly not something i would encourage the author to write again. Instead of lovebites your name should be love to write sucky stories. Instead of lovebites your name should be love to write sucky stories. cant wait to read your other stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:48:21needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer. word of advice just stop you aren’t meant for writting stories. word of advice just stop you aren’t meant for writting stories. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-15 08:51:30while i agree that the story wasn`t all that great, i do encourage you to work on it a little bit moreanonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:49:03needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer. keep up the good work! 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-15 08:51:30while i agree that the story wasn`t all that great, i do encourage you to work on it a little
