keep up the good work!«1234» the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. Sex keep up the good work!«1234» and i like how detailed you get about your characters sexual sensations, but a lot of them are common to a few of your stories, so maybe you could look for a new way to describe pleasure? the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. nothing too big though, we all get the picture. Otherwse awesome stories!! just a suggestion. i havent read a story written by you yet that didnt deserve at least an 8 or 9, but honestly, most of them (including this one) are 10’s. I hope you coninue to write because you are very talented.READERReport 2007-12-26 13:13:39U R Fingr fucking goodREADERReport 2007-12-22 21:43:54youre an amazing author, you should write more of this story…its just like love and basketball, or brown sugar, or the playas ball…i really enjoy all of your stories. Keep up the awesome wrk!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-24 04:49:44i really like all yo storiesAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-12 21:48:07That was an amazing story…you are a really good author.
