5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-25 09:26:01i love the plot device you used!!!!!!!BoonReport 2010-07-05 16:44:33its still great… And I completely agree that handing a loaded gun to someone like that is wrong in every aspect, but again, plot device.readerReport 2010-07-04 08:23:13well ihn chapter 2 he was supposed to go imortal so unless the stuff didnt work I dont see where ppl would get pissy. Sex vedio but he can regenerate depending on how bad he was injuredDoodleHeadReport 2010-07-04 13:01:24It all get’s explained/fixed in Chapter 4, call it a plot device that has been used time and time again to get readers wanting the next part. And I completely agree that handing a loaded gun to someone like that is wrong in every aspect, but again, plot device.readerReport 2010-07-04 08:23:13well ihn chapter 2 he was supposed to go imortal so unless the stuff didnt work I dont see where ppl would get pissy. just makes you want moreAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-05 05:12:56yeah like he said hes imortal/god like, so you should have it that he can die due to the fact that he was caught off guard. And I completely agree that handing a loaded gun to someone like that is wrong in every aspect, but again, plot device.readerReport 2010-07-04 08:23:13well ihn chapter 2 he was supposed to go imortal so unless the stuff didnt work I dont see where ppl would get pissy.
