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horribleREADERReport 2007-09-27 15:31:53suckedREADERReport 2006-08-17 17:16:07I didn’r bother reading it because there are no breaks… use ‘enter’ more, please…READERReport 2005-12-22 19:02:49wow…how bad can a story be… 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-21 07:37:01maybe in the 70’s…you should have learned how to write…punctuate…oh and form paragraphs
horribleREADERReport 2007-09-27 15:31:53suckedREADERReport 2006-08-17 17:16:07I didn’r bother reading it because there are no breaks… It’s hard to read something like this… the bad spelling and run on sentences…paragraphs soooo long i lost my place more times…i didnt even try to finish it…please dont write anymoreREADERReport 2005-08-31 10:36:46sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! …«123»
