and as soon as we can we will move as far away as we can and never talk to you again.” keep things a little more realistic please the end sucked.anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 02:25:35That was… It’s like you spent a couple of days writing the first part, but them you got in a hurry and just finished it all in one big paragraph to get it over with. Porn vedio the rushed unrealistic end was a real turn off and to top it off you FAILED to give a second chapter and proper end. My friend, these stories aren’t something to “get done with.” We read them because we have an excess of time, an interest in the subject, and for you to get lazy on us like that is kind of a slap in the face with the big hand of reality. it seems more likely that the kids would go to the moms and say ” we agree to parts one and two but if you insist on part three we will tell our dads everything. we will also tell them that it was your idea that we have sex in the first place. this would have got a posative vote IF you hadn’t fucked it up so bad but as is it gets a NEGATIVE vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-12 17:42:02the end killed the story,
