5 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-02-11 20:07:07I was enjoying this – until you mention she has a full bush. Sex You have several misspelled words (i.e. Pubic hair is disgusting
I thought about 7/10 until I read about the bush – sorry, only 4/10 nowanonymous readerReport 2013-09-18 22:10:19americasdirtysecrets dot us is a SCAM… Learn the difference between “to” and “too”. Learn the difference between “to” and “too”. Pubic hair is disgusting
I thought about 7/10 until I read about the bush – sorry, only 4/10 nowanonymous readerReport 2013-09-18 22:10:19americasdirtysecrets dot us is a SCAM… Did you purposely aim to make this a text version of a cock tease? If so you suck.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-17 14:02:36You should proof-read your story prior to submitting it. just a thought!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-17 21:29:28tell us your dirty secret at americasdirtysecrets dot usanonymous readerReport 2013-09-17 17:05:05It started out a good story and a decent build up to their first sexual encounter and the you just “…” most of the sex and then quickly end the story, leaving all of us readers hanging with no payoff. Using “…” means that words have been omitted, However you use it all over the place, even to begin a new paragraph.
