Like the other writer said, “Stories with sex, not the other way around” Looking forward to moreREADERReport 2007-04-03 17:56:41Buddy i think it was a fantastic story…love the way u tell stories. Sex videos …coz thts the way to tell em… maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build upon.READERReport 2007-04-16 16:44:32great story. Its really refreshing to find a writer on here who i understand! maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build upon.READERReport 2007-04-16 16:44:32great story. Its really refreshing to find a writer on here who i understand! if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. more!!READERReport 2007-04-21 13:50:14too long? but where does amie fit into it all? more of the same please!READERReport 2007-04-24 02:06:29great story. if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. more of the same please!READERReport 2007-04-24 02:06:29great story. more!!READERReport 2007-04-21 13:50:14too long? fuck off! maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build upon.READERReport 2007-04-16 16:44:32great story. more!!READERReport 2007-04-21 13:50:14too long?
