but all-in-all it sucked lol«12345» wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. And also the spelling and Grammar errors are horrible.READERReport 2008-04-08 00:07:42Um. Sex FFS dont try encouraging the twat.READERReport 2007-06-08 23:21:02Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.READERReport 2007-04-22 16:25:461. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. 2. His FIRST storie and 3. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. And erm (01-03-05). Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. FFS dont try encouraging the twat.READERReport 2007-06-08 23:21:02Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.READERReport 2007-04-22 16:25:461. Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. 2. He nvr said it was real. 2. And also the spelling and Grammar errors are horrible.READERReport 2008-04-08 00:07:42Um. He’s only 11 when he wrote it! And also the spelling and Grammar errors are horrible.READERReport 2008-04-08 00:07:42Um. 2. Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. but all-in-all it sucked lol«12345» but all-in-all it sucked lol«12345» FFS dont try encouraging the twat.READERReport 2007-06-08 23:21:02Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.READERReport 2007-04-22 16:25:461.
