this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. Sex vedio hard to keep interested? but where does amie fit into it all? Its really refreshing to find a writer on here who i understand! Stories with sex is wat its supposed to be & not the other way round..ppl here dont the point i guess. …keep up the good work looking forward to a equally fantastic series…good luck…write fast;)«12» if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. but where does amie fit into it all? hard to keep interested? maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build upon.READERReport 2007-04-16 16:44:32great story. hard to keep interested? Stories with sex is wat its supposed to be & not the other way round..ppl here dont the point i guess. …keep up the good work looking forward to a equally fantastic series…good luck…write fast;)«12» maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build upon.READERReport 2007-04-16 16:44:32great story.
