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NO ‘cum swallowing’ or ‘consensual sex’ – mistagged.READERReport 2006-07-16 15:01:54always stick-up for family nice story even if it is fiction willie tREADERReport 2006-01-14 19:25:24you have a good start. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-23 23:17:34KEihzv Thank you for your post.Thanks Again. Sex There’s more to life than just sex! There’s more to life than just sex! 9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… To me, it shows u have real potential and actually care about the characters- that’s what a real writer does, even writers like Zane. I should know, i’m a writer myself! i like it. 9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… 9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… i like it. To me, it shows u have real potential and actually care about the characters- that’s what a real writer does, even writers like Zane. To me, it shows u have real potential and actually care about the characters- that’s what a real writer does, even writers like Zane. Much obliged.ReaderReport 2009-07-05 20:57:52Well, I liked it! 9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… cant wait until the next part«123» 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-23 23:17:34KEihzv Thank you for your post.Thanks Again. To me, it shows u have real potential and actually care about the characters- that’s what a real writer does, even writers like Zane.
