Also can someone point out the spelling and grammatical errors (other than the weirds A’s) in my stories because i just put this through a spell check on Microsoft word and there were no mistakes???anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:27:51Good story but leave the  out of the storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 23:19:06I gave you a positive rating because your subject matter has promise and this story definitely needs to be continued. Porn sex Also can someone point out the spelling and grammatical errors (other than the weirds A’s) in my stories because i just put this through a spell check on Microsoft word and there were no mistakes???anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:27:51Good story but leave the  out of the storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 23:19:06I gave you a positive rating because your subject matter has promise and this story definitely needs to be continued. Also can someone point out the spelling and grammatical errors (other than the weirds A’s) in my stories because i just put this through a spell check on Microsoft word and there were no mistakes???anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:27:51Good story but leave the  out of the storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 23:19:06I gave you a positive rating because your subject matter has promise and this story definitely needs to be continued. I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story. Other than that, good job.
