I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to publishJAMES ROTHERYReport 2011-06-06 17:09:40fucking shit this story is not incest its fucking lameAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 01:20:18i dont get it is this a joke. I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to publishJAMES ROTHERYReport 2011-06-06 17:09:40fucking shit this story is not incest its fucking lameAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 01:20:18i dont get it is this a joke. Sex vedio 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-26 09:22:49So you get turned on (mildly) by:
1 the fact she is fit – WTF? ive 6’5 and im about 280 lbs. 2 your bare feet are squeezing her neck – again WTF? granted, i do have a fair bit, but im just wide.cajunReport 2009-08-06 07:51:21Put a chapter 2 to it and give more details and then you may have something going. you do know this is a porn site right.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-09 15:03:17these stories seem to alwways have tiny ppl. maby 5-10 lbs is fat, and im not super muscled either. It had it’s chances: foot slipping off calf, causing your crutch pushing
