It is still very hot and I enjoyed it so, I’ll be nice and give it a whole 8 despite the repetation error.READERReport 2006-01-03 20:10:48listen dude you must pay attention to what you’re writing, repeats are boring, and indicate you’re getting too excited writing the story. 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-14 02:03:44STOP SMOKING WEED WHEN YOU WRITE STORIES.READERReport 2007-04-08 10:00:11good story 7/10 the repetitions were annoying.u r a good writer caus wen the sex started i started cumming and now i cant stop.oh and would u like to fuk my brains out.READERReport 2006-01-08 08:09:05As everyone else have already said, the repetations totally ruin the pace. Sex videos 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-14 02:03:44STOP SMOKING WEED WHEN YOU WRITE STORIES.READERReport 2007-04-08 10:00:11good story 7/10 the repetitions were annoying.u r a good writer caus wen the sex started i started cumming and now i cant stop.oh and would u like to fuk my brains out.READERReport 2006-01-08 08:09:05As everyone else have already said, the repetations totally ruin the pace. It is still very hot and I enjoyed it so, I’ll be nice and give it a whole 8 despite the repetation error.READERReport 2006-01-03 20:10:48listen dude you must pay attention to what you’re writing, repeats are boring, and indicate you’re getting too excited writing the story.
