7 comments«12»EfonReport 2012-04-23 12:09:45Nice idea that could be great, but sloppy and rushed execution.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:38:57Hope to see part 2 soonanonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:23:17Great story part 2 soon.«12» 7 comments«12»EfonReport 2012-04-23 12:09:45Nice idea that could be great, but sloppy and rushed execution.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:38:57Hope to see part 2 soonanonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:23:17Great story part 2 soon.«12» 7 comments«12»EfonReport 2012-04-23 12:09:45Nice idea that could be great, but sloppy and rushed execution.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:38:57Hope to see part 2 soonanonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:23:17Great story part 2 soon.«12» 7 comments«12»EfonReport 2012-04-23 12:09:45Nice idea that could be great, but sloppy and rushed execution.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:38:57Hope to see part 2 soonanonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:23:17Great story part 2 soon.«12» 7 comments«12»EfonReport 2012-04-23 12:09:45Nice idea that could be great, but sloppy and rushed execution.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:38:57Hope to see part 2 soonanonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:23:17Great story part 2 soon.«12» 7 comments«12»EfonReport 2012-04-23 12:09:45Nice idea that could be great, but sloppy and rushed execution.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:44:43needs to be sloweranonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:38:57Hope to see part 2 soonanonymous readerReport 2011-10-06 22:23:17Great story part 2 soon.«12»
