6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-13 13:33:50At the comment on 2008-07-02 at 14:40:19…how about he just fucks them and enjoys it without getting them pregnant and having 27 kids between the two of them? 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-13 13:33:50At the comment on 2008-07-02 at 14:40:19…how about he just fucks them and enjoys it without getting them pregnant and having 27 kids between the two of them? Porn vedio including the thunder storm? Sheesh…why in the fuck are so many people obsessed with getting every character in every fucking story pregnant?!?!?anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 03:29:31You saved me a lot of hsalse just now.SequoiaReport 2008-07-02 14:40:19Keep fucking Amber and Ashley and get them both pregnant. You need to flesh out the charectors a little, i.e. In some ways you have the skills, you just need a better story. On the flip side, your writing was well composed, the descriptions were OK and the sex was pretty well put together. wow, their good! They planned it? Keep it up.«12» Sheesh…why in the fuck are so many people obsessed with getting every character in every fucking story pregnant?!?!?anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 03:29:31You saved me a lot of hsalse just now.SequoiaReport 2008-07-02 14:40:19Keep fucking Amber and Ashley and get them both pregnant.
