10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-29 19:27:02Well people here are saying bad grammar but I have seen so much worseanonymous readerReport 2012-09-01 19:44:13Nevermind I’m wronganonymous readerReport 2012-09-01 19:43:39Don’t you mean 3rd person?anonymous readerReport 2012-07-21 18:00:48@Anonymous reader
2009-06-04 15:47:08
Not to take away any meaning, but this isn’t first person. The grammar and spelling in this story are utterly atrocious.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-08 19:15:24I agree, the spelling isn’t the best. Porn sex Its called 2nd person perspective, a very rare and difficult way to write. There are a lot of you and yours in there for 1st person. Its called 2nd person perspective, a very rare and difficult way to write. But everyone is making comments with numbers instead of words, make sure your house is in order before you go looking at other houses. However, you’re right on your other points. But everyone is making comments with numbers instead of words, make sure your house is in order before you go looking at other houses. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-29 19:27:02Well people here are saying bad grammar but I have seen so much worseanonymous readerReport 2012-09-01 19:44:13Nevermind I’m wronganonymous readerReport 2012-09-01 19:43:39Don’t you mean 3rd person?anonymous readerReport 2012-07-21 18:00:48@Anonymous reader
2009-06-04 15:47:08
Not to take away any meaning, but this isn’t first person. There are a lot of you and yours in there for 1st person. It is a good story, is that actually 1st person?
