His FIRST storie and 3. Sex vedio And also the spelling and Grammar errors are horrible.READERReport 2008-04-08 00:07:42Um. Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. 2. FFS dont try encouraging the twat.READERReport 2007-06-08 23:21:02Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.READERReport 2007-04-22 16:25:461. His FIRST storie and 3. Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. He’s only 11 when he wrote it! FFS dont try encouraging the twat.READERReport 2007-06-08 23:21:02Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.READERReport 2007-04-22 16:25:461. And erm (01-03-05). His FIRST storie and 3. Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. And erm (01-03-05). 43 comments«12345»Kiba SnowpawReport 2019-03-10 10:27:15I’m terrible at writing stories, but I’m pretty sure I could do a better job than this. Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. And erm (01-03-05).
