Every time I see it I won’t read the story. Sex …anonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 21:50:10Yeah, what he said VVanonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 16:00:08if it was in first person i think i would have liked it , as it is i couldn’t get past the first paragraph«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-14 18:11:27Are you even old enough to be on this site? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-14 18:11:27Are you even old enough to be on this site? Every time I see it I won’t read the story. …anonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 21:50:10Yeah, what he said VVanonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 16:00:08if it was in first person i think i would have liked it , as it is i couldn’t get past the first paragraph«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-14 18:11:27Are you even old enough to be on this site? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-14 18:11:27Are you even old enough to be on this site? Not just horrible writing but reminiscent of a middle schooler trying to be something they aren’t. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-14 18:11:27Are you even old enough to be on this site? Every time I see it I won’t read the story. …anonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 21:50:10Yeah, what he said VVanonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 16:00:08if it was in first person i think i would have liked it , as it is i couldn’t get past the first paragraph«1» Not just horrible writing but reminiscent of a middle schooler trying to be something they aren’t.
