(â°Ë︹Ëâ°)anonymous readerReport 2011-07-06 19:51:03that is a GREAT story i loved it need to 9mprove your grammar but other than that its greatanonymous readerReport 2011-07-06 16:35:59Love it …Details are great..PappaReport 2011-07-04 04:56:49The problem was my auto-correct on my mac, if I make a typo it does it’s best to fix it and mistakes the word for others. Sex videos Did you quit school in the sixth grade or were your teachers really that incompetent? I’m not in the mood for this crap. as well as a couple of grammatical foul ups. as well as a couple of grammatical foul ups. as well as a couple of grammatical foul ups. as well as a couple of grammatical foul ups. I see a lot that what I wright ‘as well’ it changes it to ‘swell’
This problem is only in the first story, the next three chapters are better, and the last two I would think are pretty perfect.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-03 23:55:59”I would descry myself as a cool guy”
I would DESCRIBE myself as a cool guy. I see a lot that what I wright ‘as well’ it changes it to ‘swell’
This problem is only in the first story, the next three chapters are better, and the last two I would think are pretty perfect.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-03 23:55:59”I would descry myself as a cool guy”
I would DESCRIBE myself as a cool guy.
