“Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. Give the readers a reason to click on your story!«1» Would you bother ordering supper if the restaurant menu just said “Food”? Sex Nice going.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 22:00:55i liked it :)Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 20:50:50Why do people not use tags? One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-31 23:34:17creative way to narrate the story. One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. “Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. Give the readers a reason to click on your story!«1» Nice going.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 22:00:55i liked it :)Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-30 20:50:50Why do people not use tags? “Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. “Fantasy” tells the reader nothing. One has to read the first several paragraphs before even finding out if ‘Terry’ is a boy or a girl. Would you bother ordering supper if the restaurant menu just said “Food”? Would you bother ordering supper if the restaurant menu just said “Food”? Give the readers a reason to click on your story!«1» Give the readers a reason to click on your story!«1»
