One of the basics in dialogue is to start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Sex vedio Though there are ways how he could have put it away (hands tied in front of hi body), I completely forgot he was tied up xD. This eliminates relying on literary intuition or repetative he said she said. One of the basics in dialogue is to start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Also please forgive my lack of punctuation. That is a very good point. I do also agree that I am rushing this part a bit, but that is partially to get to what most people are here for… But thank you for your reply 🙂 I will try to go more slowly from here and remember to reread my chapters before posting them :)anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 16:15:28Hey Kitsune_Lord, thank you for your response. But thank you for your reply 🙂 I will try to go more slowly from here and remember to reread my chapters before posting them :)anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 16:15:28Hey Kitsune_Lord, thank you for your response. Look forward to seeing more. I do also agree that I am rushing this part a bit, but that is partially to get to what most people are here for… But thank you for your reply 🙂 I will try to go more slowly from here
