Needs breaking up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-16 02:18:46The characters may have been more developed in the previous stories
This is a great story. Sex vedio Keep it up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-15 23:12:28The story feels a bit rushed the characters and plot could use a bit more development and the sex could be a bit more detailed but overall you have written an enjoyably HOT story and I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-15 15:36:13That was so incredibly hot! You are An amazing writer!«1» I orgasmed twice from reading that story! Needs breaking up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-16 02:18:46The characters may have been more developed in the previous stories
This is a great story. I get wet from just the thought of that being my family! 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-19 03:19:16SCREW YOU TROLL FACEanonymous readerReport 2013-01-20 09:28:42Hot story, but bad layout – these big blocks of text are difficult to plough through. Can’t wait for the next part! Keep it up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-15 23:12:28The story feels a bit rushed the characters and plot could use a bit more development and the sex could be a bit more detailed but overall you have written an enjoyably HOT story and I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-15 15:36:13That was so incredibly hot! Please continue! Needs breaking up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-16 02:18:46The characters may have been more developed in the previous stories
This is a great story.
