You need to use apostrophes. Sex this is a story not a movie details help the readers to involve in the scene as if they are watching it (some may masturbate) try to concentrate in ur next story also ur sex partner didn’t say much asif he is a machine. its too short. You need to use apostrophes. And as everyone else has told you, you need to use paragraphs too. You need to use apostrophes. The letter i needs to be capitalized. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! hah and again…paragraphsAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 00:42:33paragraphs pleasefbaileyReport 2008-08-30 12:44:59You really need to use a spell checker and then you need to proofread your work before submitting it. hah and again…paragraphsAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 00:42:33paragraphs pleasefbaileyReport 2008-08-30 12:44:59You really need to use a spell checker and then you need to proofread your work before submitting it. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! You need to use apostrophes. its too short. its too short. Better luck next time.«12» Better luck next time.«12» You need to use apostrophes. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details !
