Did I miss something?«12» WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-08-30 23:34:56Lots of errors in this story and it totally lacked realism!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-08-29 22:03:16Good story, but you need to learn to properly tag your work. Did I miss something?«12» Did I miss something?«12» 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:24:01Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs. Sex vedio WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-08-30 23:34:56Lots of errors in this story and it totally lacked realism!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-08-29 22:03:16Good story, but you need to learn to properly tag your work. WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:23:46Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:24:01Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs. Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. If something isn’t in your story, don’t include a tag that says it is.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-29 20:42:56So where was the young in the story. If something isn’t in your story, don’t include a tag that says it is.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-29 20:42:56So where was the young in the story. Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. If something isn’t in your story, don’t include a tag that says it is.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-29 20:42:56So where was the young in the story. Did I miss something?«12» Did I miss something?«12» WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:23:46Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs.
