Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. Porn sex . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … no more incest… Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… it is ruining the story line… the first chapter was good.. no more incest… 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-14 20:58:48Nice twist with the sister being a he/she or he a guy raised as a girl. you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … no more incest… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-14 20:58:48Nice twist with the sister being a he/she or he a guy raised as a girl. you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. the first chapter was good.. You need more segues between events.«1» You need more segues between events.«1» the first chapter was good.. Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter.
