It would have been fine to work in a little jail cell sex. It would have been fine to work in a little jail cell sex. Sex vedio When you have this many different characters in one scene, use fewer pronouns so it’s easier to keep track of what’s actually happening. =dreamer=«1» If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-19 06:13:13The plot was interesting, but rushed and convoluted. If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. =dreamer=«1» When you have this many different characters in one scene, use fewer pronouns so it’s easier to keep track of what’s actually happening. =dreamer=«1» also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-19 06:13:13The plot was interesting, but rushed and convoluted.
