Some of the commenters have worse english than Matthew54057. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. Porn sex You’re gonna give us all a bad name with with your damn nonsense. See if it’s what you really want to say. Now see there, I done learnt ya sumpin’ today.«123» Good Luck.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-08 12:51:06I look forward to reading part 2anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 03:52:09One of the most eloquent burns I’ve seen on this site. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. I bet when you read these here stories you get stiffer than a peter on a weddin’ night! Some of the commenters have worse english than Matthew54057. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. Third, I think you meant ‘time’. Some of the commenters have worse english than Matthew54057. Now see there, I done learnt ya sumpin’ today.«123» The story line is not bad. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. See if it’s what you really want to say. First, it’s spelled ‘grammar’. Read some books so that you can see just how a story should be written.
