there’s only so much you can do. tell me what you thinkREADERReport 2004-09-15 19:49:22john… Sex videos come back when you’re refreshed!READERReport 2004-09-13 22:20:27Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work.READERReport 2004-09-13 19:51:32Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. This part is rated lower than Part II ?? come back when you’re refreshed!READERReport 2004-09-13 22:20:27Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work.READERReport 2004-09-13 19:51:32Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. Look at The Camp nurse, It is a good story, but it really should be divided down into smaller ones, and it is quite repeptive, with some very weird stuff, i think you know what i mean. Maybe i should just post the next two or three as one. …
