Grammar Nazi.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-12 21:34:08needs a rewrite and a good editor way to many STUPID ERRORS that you should have caught IF YOU HAD PROOFREAD THIS which you obviously didn’t.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:36:52A few spelling and basic grammar errors, but much more importantly, it flowed, and the plot was amazing, so yes, another part would be advisable.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-14 08:19:50yes another part is in order«12345» Grammar Nazi.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-12 21:34:08needs a rewrite and a good editor way to many STUPID ERRORS that you should have caught IF YOU HAD PROOFREAD THIS which you obviously didn’t.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:36:52A few spelling and basic grammar errors, but much more importantly, it flowed, and the plot was amazing, so yes, another part would be advisable.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-14 08:19:50yes another part is in order«12345» This site is full of amateur writers and a low amount of moderate-professional writers. Sex 22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-19 00:30:07kind of hard to post a second chapter to a story you stole ISN’T IT loser.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-17 09:45:36@Below
Fuck off, you dont need to get at someone with caps flowing all over your comment. Grammar Nazi.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-12 21:34:08needs a rewrite and a good editor way to many STUPID ERRORS that you should have caught IF YOU HAD PROOFREAD THIS which you obviously didn’t.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:36:52A few spelling and basic grammar errors, but much more importantly, it flowed, and the plot was amazing,
