keep writing and work to improve your command of english. good luck.” Who ever wrote that is a dumbass, insulting his grammar but not being good at it yourself, way TOO many errors to read not way to many. Sex vedio way to many errors in grammar and word usage to be enjoyable to read. quit fuckin lying and learn grammar you fagREADERReport 2007-02-07 19:30:15″Get an editor or a friend to read your stories and clean them up. keep writing and work to improve your command of english. Idiot.But yeah, the grammar in this story really did suck balls big time.READERReport 2007-02-03 05:09:40learn to write properly and quit making up bullshit«123» 14 comments«123»weman40Report 2009-03-05 21:32:48me mom never did anything like that for me lucky guy next time get her drunk she will be more open to letting you pound her pussy liquor is quicker drunk moms like girlfriends put out.READERReport 2008-04-05 01:31:09kantotREADERReport 2007-02-10 16:37:23how could it be a long time coming if ur family wasn’t open about sexuality. 14 comments«123»weman40Report 2009-03-05 21:32:48me mom never did anything like that for me lucky guy next time get her drunk she will be more open to letting you pound her pussy liquor is quicker drunk moms like girlfriends put out.READERReport 2008-04-05 01:31:09kantotREADERReport 2007-02-10 16:37:23how could it be a long time coming if ur family wasn’t open about sexuality.
