I feel this, regardless of wome written comments, well versed and very, very interested. Porn sex 10 comments«12»readerReport 2008-08-11 19:08:18mycomment is the same thank youAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-19 20:52:59I thought the story was good until this last chapter.. I have had some exposure to DBSM Clubs, as a guest and have found that not all of them are sadistic or cruel. It’s like you knew what you wanted to create for us but got bored in the telling. I have had some exposure to DBSM Clubs, as a guest and have found that not all of them are sadistic or cruel. Other than that i thought the premise was terrific. Wish i knew of a club like thatREADERReport 2007-12-09 11:28:48Try Slowing down and think about what you are tring to tell.READERReport 2007-01-20 22:51:18I normally write my comments at the end of Chapter Stories. WSell done, keep up this style of work Worthy of 8.5 / 9
thanksREADERReport 2005-11-18 05:52:441/10 I wanted to give it a 2/10 but I couldn’t.«12» I do think you should slow down a little bit as i felt the middle chapters were rushed.
